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So a little background on me. I've been an energy worker most my life, recent graduate of massage school, own my own business. Recently had the local paper out to do a story on my reiki and massage business. Now I have been invited to speak at a Cancer Patients Survivor Picnic at the local hospital. Topic will be Does Reiki help cancer patients. I have about three pages worth of information, as I am splitting 15 minutes with the Director of Massage Therapy at the school I attended. I will be offering Reiki on site also. I will have to attach the whole speech in a seperate post as it exceeds the allowed space for this post.