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Hey Angela...i don't see your post on here anymore.
Hey Angela...i don't see your post on here anymore.
Hey Angela...
Here are some suggestions:
Let's start with the basic background. The white area up top feels off. it's not needed and just adds "clutter". you already have your nav bar listed so it doesn't need to be listed again up there. your logo, which i found only on the contact page, should definitely be on the home page and i see it working best in the area that you currently have your Name and info in that pink box to the left.
the photos are nice but i would NOT animate them. honestly...animation only works really well as a beginning intro. when it's in the body of the pages it just becomes distracting.
as for the ocean waves...i would opt to have something on your page that allows the user to turn it on or off so that you don't force it upon your visitor. some will like it some won't. i particularly don't like it seeing that if i'm surfing the web i probably will have some other noise distraction going on so the wave will become competitive to what i am listening to as i'm visiting the site.
i would suggest getting rid of the sunset image. that section is for content and as such it should give the content clearly. right now the picture is competing with the content.
also...check how many fonts you are using and stick to only 2...one for main info and one for highlighted info. and remember...on all your pages...you should have the content info in black and the highlighted info in a color.
i definitely liked your video that you posted on your profile here...you should include that on your web. one thing...if possible...the couple of times in the video that you are being filmed....you should look directly into the camera so the visitor can connect with you. by capturing you from your profile it keeps the visitor from really seeing you.
also...when you click to your contact page...a link to the home page disappears.
hope this helps!!
Hi Lisa, thank you very much!
-The menu that is on the white top part, I know.. it looks "clutter". But according to my SEO's, this helps to search engines get faster all the information of each page. So that's why its there. I'm going to talk to her again so I can take it out because honestly I don't like it either. But for me its very important my website be well optimized to for search engines.
-The logo I put it on the right, beside the title. What do you think there? But I will try to put it where you told me, beside my name and info.
-The animated photos on the top... can't change them. The thing is this: the website is done by a template I bought. So the top of the website can't be changed unfortunately. That's how the template has been designed. So that top of the website, its static. It's the same on all the pages. :-(
-About the ocean waves. I understand what you mean. But there is a button above my name, where it says "massage Therapist". That button is for muting the music of the ocean waves.
-About the sunset picture. I put it because I think that gives some kind of relaxation visually.(That's why I put the ocean waves so that gives some relaxation too). Soon I will be taking some pictures of myself giving massage on the beach. Do you think that would be good to put it on the home page? or do you think its better not putting any picture there at all?
-About the fonts, you are right. That's one of the things I'm fixing. ;-)
-About the video, that's other thing I'm updating in my website. According to the editor and director of my video, he recommended not to talk directly to the camera, he said its better like I'm talking to somebody else beside the camera.
-Oh the contact page, yes.. that "home" button.. other thing I have to fix. I have to fix other buttons on the Spanish version as well.
Thank you Lisa!! my website looks a little better now, but still need to fix other things.. ;0)
I let you know when I make all this changes! thanks again!
Angela.
Lisa said:Hey Angela...
Here are some suggestions:
Let's start with the basic background. The white area up top feels off. it's not needed and just adds "clutter". you already have your nav bar listed so it doesn't need to be listed again up there. your logo, which i found only on the contact page, should definitely be on the home page and i see it working best in the area that you currently have your Name and info in that pink box to the left.
the photos are nice but i would NOT animate them. honestly...animation only works really well as a beginning intro. when it's in the body of the pages it just becomes distracting.
as for the ocean waves...i would opt to have something on your page that allows the user to turn it on or off so that you don't force it upon your visitor. some will like it some won't. i particularly don't like it seeing that if i'm surfing the web i probably will have some other noise distraction going on so the wave will become competitive to what i am listening to as i'm visiting the site.
i would suggest getting rid of the sunset image. that section is for content and as such it should give the content clearly. right now the picture is competing with the content.
also...check how many fonts you are using and stick to only 2...one for main info and one for highlighted info. and remember...on all your pages...you should have the content info in black and the highlighted info in a color.
i definitely liked your video that you posted on your profile here...you should include that on your web. one thing...if possible...the couple of times in the video that you are being filmed....you should look directly into the camera so the visitor can connect with you. by capturing you from your profile it keeps the visitor from really seeing you.
also...when you click to your contact page...a link to the home page disappears.
hope this helps!!
Hi! I'm not a webmaster but here post one of my pages.
http://sagessedumassage.blogspot.com/
Take care everyone!
also found this site from a member's profile. this is a really good one in my opinion.
http://www.movefreemassage.com
(hope you don't mind Geoff) :)
also found this site from a member's profile. this is a really good one in my opinion.
http://www.movefreemassage.com
(hope you don't mind Geoff) :)
Hi Everyone
http://web.me.com/jmcole5 is my new website that I designed myself. I have no experience designing websites and some feedback would be helpful. I designed it using an Apple and that's the address they gave me. Anybody know of a good site to get a domain name? Also anybody have experience with online gift certificates?
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